Fairness is twisted
Construed like a clock
Its hand, screws, and numbers
Seemingly move in one lock
If one part is taken or
A hand, number added
The time is disfigured
The whole thing dismattered
awesome poem, i love poems that have to do with time and this is no exeption. i would say it all flows so smoothly but maybe the lines “If one part is taken or A hand, number added” could have more cohesiveness like the other lines. like how the last two lines end with d words or how the 2nd and 4th line rhyme.
awesome poem, i love poems that have to do with time and this is no exeption. i would say it all flows so smoothly but maybe the lines “If one part is taken or
ReplyDeleteA hand, number added” could have more cohesiveness like the other lines. like how the last two lines end with d words or how the 2nd and 4th line rhyme.